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River Calder 1 by =markhossack:iconmarkhossack:

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Been off for a week and haven't been near the computer for a change. So much to catch up on here!

Went to Calderglen Country Park while I was off.

This is a shot of the River Calder. Playing around with manual focus. Used my Tamron 55-200mm lens.

Thanks for looking and hope you all had a great weekend!

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=Baz135 Jun 22, 2009, 4:02:28 AM
Very nice picture, but it's a bit too crowded. I see what you were trying to do, with the path next to the tree and the river, but all the growth on the other side of the river throws it off. Maybe if you had moved more to the left, or maybe if you moved to the right and took the shot facing towards the tree, or something else, because you can always manipulate a scene by your placement. Keep that in mind :nod:
What else...
It doesn't quite seem as if you do much post processing, correct? A couple of tweaks and you could make this shot really pop (levels, contrast, etc.) but like I said above, the way to most improve this shot is to take it from another perspective. Going into the comp with a great shot gets you out with a real stunner.
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~Moyashi-chan Jun 14, 2009, 1:38:33 PM
That's amazing.

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*lorddarkwolf Jun 14, 2009, 9:34:04 PM
this shot with the path rocks!

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=PetraR123 Jun 15, 2009, 12:50:29 PM
Oh what a quiet looking dreamy place.
One can imagine the faeries coming out in the Night to dance.

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=markhossack Jun 17, 2009, 12:39:48 AM
Thanks a lot!

Thanks for the :+fav: too! :)
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*lorddarkwolf Jun 17, 2009, 6:41:09 AM
I may want to use it for art...lol!

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~Moyashi-chan Jun 17, 2009, 2:57:02 PM
no problem!

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~oddpixels Jun 20, 2009, 5:18:06 PM
Wow - this is just heaven!

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SONY
DSLR-A200
1/100 second
F/4.0
55 mm
100
Jun 9, 2009, 12:05:46 PM

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